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Do you agree or disagree Internet should be like other services such as roads and government should provide it to the public with no cost

Considering the living throgh modern era have been persuades governments and the nations to develope their life by usinf the technology which is now invent the major parts of our new life. The internet among other technology play a crucial role in people's life. In fact access to the internet make the people's life convenice rather than befor. providing the conecton of the internet among the people is sponcered by government. Some people assume that gornment should provide internet on free. However, others disagree. In my perspective paying money to the government agains using internet has various advantages which I will explore in the following essay.
First and formost, it goes without saying that giving money from people for the specific amounts of using internet would have enhounc the government's incoms. In other words, as the using internet is more popular among the people, the income from this industry would have been a great and helpful factor for governments incoms. In this regard, what is tremendosly shows is to develope the qualification of the truly access and the fast speed of the internet which covers the wholy amounts of user. One of my own example is a good case in point. a pandamic deseas have been distributed among the human in the world about one year befor which cause more busines become over run. However, some job were available only through accesing to the internet, Whereas, the extent of using interenet have been dramaticaly uplifted throgh that pandamic deseas which had been caous government to earn much money rather thatn some negative effects that had been lefted on the governmnets economic and play kind of helping fact to compensate some financial disadvantages of the world's problem.
ANother special reasone that shows the governmnet better to give mony throgh providing internet is that there is non a anologes of usung every one from internet. What i am telling is that, people have useing internet in the differents amounts which is shows the fact that pay free is kind of unfair. I had been experienc this fact in my life for temporary days which government gave the online conection free to one city to make a scientific explore. Althogh it get sicenctist a great well-time to use free charge of internet, other population used that opportunity which cause to decreas the qualification of the internet which could be more beneficial for other groups of scientist.
In conclusion, I totally disagree that providing internet should be free. In that case , I does not only unfair for different users with various goals, It could eliminate a significant amounts of money which government could make.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'invented'.
Suggestion: invented
...fe by usinf the technology which is now invent the major parts of our new life. The in...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...In fact access to the internet make the peoples life convenice rather than befor. provi...
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Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Providing
...oples life convenice rather than befor. providing the conecton of the internet among the ...
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Line 2, column 544, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...my own example is a good case in point. a pandamic deseas have been distributed a...
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Line 2, column 1061, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ate some financial disadvantages of the worlds problem. ANother special reasone that...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...providing internet is that there is non a anologes of usung every one from intern...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of usung every one from internet. What i am telling is that, people have useing ...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...o make a scientific explore. Althogh it get sicenctist a great well-time to use fre...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng internet should be free. In that case , I does not only unfair for different us...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...ternet should be free. In that case , I does not only unfair for different users wit...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'amount'?
Suggestion: amount
...goals, It could eliminate a significant amounts of money which government could make. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04318181818 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58896943546 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497727272727 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0615852881 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.789473684 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1578947368 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165101879852 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702738234062 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709532143833 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129779311605 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510975190654 0.0645574589148 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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