Admittendly, workers play a pivotal role in the proccecing of te developing countries. the more skilledfull labor the better development countries. Some people believe that having many different skill would help producer to become more happier rather than doing one job. however, others disagree. As far as I am concern, engaging with multiple taske would have some beneficial for employee. Ifeel this way for two reasones which I will explore in the following essay.
First and formost, it is good to say that, If you gain different skilles Through your life time especialy in your youngsters age, you will be more useful in your carear procec. In other words, the more onc being skillful craft the more being beneficial in his profecional environment. One of my own example is a good case in poin. When I was studied in universities I had deciede to engage myselfe in different part-time job which one of my professres had sugestedme. I was recomanded to the big company which was an important stage of my life, because, I had gain the oportuinities to serounded my selfe with different activities as a voluntier. What was quiet important for me was that to fain various skills over the course of my part-time job. During that time I feel sens of satisfaction because I have gain different skils which was drasticaly useful for my futures job.
Second, people with kinds of abilities have great chance to become wealtheir. In fact, one who have more skills would have great chance to join in a big groups of business which is absolotly make more money for them. One resent study represents the result of number of skillfull employee in groups of companey. What was really obvious was that, companies are now needed the profecional and crafty and hand experienc people which could be more effective for them. These circumstances shows that, If people gain more task and duty during their carear time, they would have bigger chance to employe in such big company with greater income.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that grasping various knowledge and skiils through your jobe is not only make you handy and useful one but also give you a chance to become enhance your wage and incom, which is kind of satisfing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... proccecing of te developing countries. the more skilledfull labor the better devel...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ntries. Some people believe that having many different skill would help producer to become mor...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...ent skill would help producer to become more happier rather than doing one job. however, oth...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...more happier rather than doing one job. however, others disagree. As far as I am concer...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...you gain different skilles Through your life time especialy in your youngsters age, you w...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... my own example is a good case in poin. When I was studied in universities I had dec...
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Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'gained'.
Suggestion: gained
...ortant stage of my life, because, I had gain the oportuinities to serounded my selfe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85978835979 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61142737292 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7073986924 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6842105263 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174229356082 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504681167259 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433114712939 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988170755324 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360232940593 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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