Human being consider the television as conclusive devises which can engage and connecte people to the art environment and the news that ecours all around the worlds. On one hand it would be a good chance for humans to find the mashines that can connect them to the worlds. On the other hand, it couse some negative impacts on the youngstairs. As far as psycologic goes the negative impacts of watching television are rather the positive. I agree with the stetments for to reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, art producers used the television inorder to propose their art promotes the coltural environment in the tv shows which can involves people efficently and couse they become addicted. In fact, as the programes schadualed to make succesively, people encourege to spend most of their time on tv, which is quit harmfull. Althogh, known as entertainmet, other leisur activitiesare still existed which helpful for the comminication skills and the improving physical to avoid becoming homeless and feeling depretion. Some researches shows that people who spend their leisure time with their friends can be more success to comminicate with other peoples.
Second,it goes without saying that seeting in one side and just listening to the news and other watching different movies let people become fat and cause some obbesity. In other words, watching movies consider as an educational and enterteinment devise, there are other social networks that invented which can be under controlled and avoid from being motionless. One of my own examples is a good case in poin. I remember that I got accoustomed to watch television for more than 18 hours which caused me to become sick and oy behind of my assinment. My friend propose to use the internet and watch the movies by youtupe which led you to arreng your time in orther to do both your homework and enterteimnet in a right way.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that watching tv have more negative effect rather possitives. It is not only couse the obesitie and people get sick but also make people feel homless and theybecome less familier with commiunication skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me negative impacts on the youngstairs. As far as psycologic goes the negative imp...
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Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
... and feeling depretion. Some researches shows that people who spend their leisure tim...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... comminicate with other peoples. Second,it goes without saying that seeting in one...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... do both your homework and enterteimnet in a right way. In conclusion, I firmly agree that wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99164345404 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72032633255 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543175487465 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1808432165 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197664350045 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661505189444 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055447193515 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123190143851 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412520337823 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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