Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Considering the fact that life is too short and human have certain right to move and sea all around the world, moving from one place to another would give them the great amounts of opportunities, without which, life no longer left and the well-time to gain monumental job opportunity and well friends connection would not be imagining. In my personal view, sedentary life style is emerging as a compelling evidence of choosing wrong way to live. I feel this way for two reasones which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, It goes without saying that by living in different cities by discret location which have monumental cultural background would have been make life more satisfied and practical. In other words, world presented lots of advantures which is circulated in all around the world that every persone would be better to experienc. moreover, in that condicive condition people can seiz the opportunities in order to make a great friends connection from all over the world. One of my own experiences is a good case in point. my friend and I were living in one small city for a long time which was clearly dulling that makes me to think about immigrating to other country. since I had migerated and left my own city I coud know many new people which were comming from all around the world. The decision that I had made culminated in building the new environmnet with new friends and exciting advantures that hapend in the follow. It would never happen if I had never left my own city after a long years of sedentary lifestyle.
Additional reasones that convince me to agree with moving around instead of sitting in one city is to making and developing the job opportunities. In fact, there are bounch of job facilities with learning new skils that every person could gain by their researching and goining into the different place. My friends example is a compeling evidenc that shows this idea. He is migrating for long time from Europe to us and mane countries which gave rise to develop his job and accuire great skills in his life.
In conclusion , I firmly agree that people should seize their opportunities in order to make the most of time in their life by experiencing differents places to live instead of settel in one place. It is not only gave them well-time to make new friends connection but also gave them job opportunities result in obtaining new skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76498800959 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63466217814 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508393285372 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3623189396 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.882352941 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5294117647 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200393840507 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670779073086 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468822972592 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131962427598 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264706553106 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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