There are several activities for relaxing. It is possible to watch an interesting movie, read a novel, or do some physical exercise. Some people believe that doing physical activities is best. Others oppose this idea and prefer to watch a movie or read a book rather than doing exercise. Although both of these viewpoints have several advantages and disadvantages, I, personally, agree with the first group because of several conspicuous reasons which will be elaborated as follows.
First of all, physical activities make people more energetic than just watching a movie or reading a book. Doing exercise helps individuals to both remove negative energies and absorb the positive ones. Physical activities also rise keenly their body’s resilience, as people who do sports activities in their free time are healthier. An example can drive the notion dramatically home. Often the rate of energetic and satisfied employees enhances when their employers persuade them to do some exercise in their rest time. Therefore, doing physical exercise for relaxing should be considered.
Another reason is that doing exercise for being relaxed can also increase concentration during our projects. It supports people to focus easier on a particular activity after the rest time. Moreover, doing physical activities mitigate stress and anxiety. Therefore, individuals can manage issues on their career or at university/school in more convenient condition. An example is one of my diaries, which was about my hardworking to prepare for the Toefl exam. When I was studying hard in a stressful situation, swimming, as an entertaining exercise, was the only activity which helped me deal with. It is because of the fact that this physical activity declined my stress and helped me to be relaxed.
All in all, it is more beneficial to relax by doing physical exercise. I, totally support my idea with two noticeable reasons in the previous paragraphs. I believe that physical activities enhance individuals’ energy and concentration, which is much better than spending their rest time on watching movies or reading books.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...tivity which helped me deal with. It is because of the fact that this physical activity declined my stre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39759036145 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98089309056 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8249338874 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38095238095 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299144765005 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986105065812 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851600560449 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213974152397 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695697176051 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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