Do you agree or disagree? It is better to work with your own computer and telephone at your home than work in your company's office.
All people fantasize to have a job which is comfortable to work, money- oriented and consisting a number of holiday. Some people also find easy to the job which can be done from their home. However, in my opinion, doing our work at home is not prudent decision because of the following reasons.
First, working at home, though save our time, can be full of disturbance which directly impact negatively in their work's performance. Especially, people are living with their family, they might have their children at their home and can pry in their office matter. For instance, in the covid pandemic, I am assigned to attend the duty from my home. I have to write a myriad of reference articles about the recent political and social incident. However, I became disturbed frequently by my brother's children as they keep sneaking my room and disturb me while I am working. Actually, I need a very quiet environment to complete my task and even a small disturbance makes me distract and out of focus to do a work. Consequently, I took a lot of time to do same work which I easily accomplish considerably in shorter spell when I was in the office.
Second, home is not crucially influence to make you feel dizzy and lethargic. Actually, we assume our home work unconsiously the place to relax. Therefore, when working at home, it is difficult to get charge to do work. To illustrate this, once I was given a week time to complete my work from my home as I broke my leg due to bike accident. Despite having a plenty time to do work as I didnot have to rush to office, I proscastinated my work even more. The reason for my this attitude because there was nobody to take control for my action. Had I been to office at that time, I would have definitely finish my task earlier.
Lastly, people often miss the opportunity to be entertained and refresh at home. During the office time, we are opportune to meet a lot of people where we can share our laugh and thought. In fact, it gives a break from a monotonous and tedious task. As a result, we may build up some healthy relationship with the other person. In contrast, at home environment, we hardly manage to talk with other person and have to stare with the work all the time. My personal experience is good example of this. During the one summer season, my brother was made to work from home. At that time, he had to spend his all day doing work alone. He soon found it vapid as he had nobody around him to share some pep talk; Consequently, he quiet his job.
To wrap up, the aforementioned reasons are key for me not assuming doing work is the right decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'finished'.
Suggestion: finished
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have definitely finish my task earlier. Lastly, people often miss the opportunit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in short, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49579831933 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6123170306 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512605042017 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7650564608 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2592592593 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6296296296 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214450531793 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713337367571 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609476497344 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135546685757 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293892698191 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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