Do you agree or disagree?
It’ s better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises?
At the beginning of the new era, the pressure of competition becomes fiercer and fiercer. Undergoing lots of competitions in the field of working or studying, people might bear lots of stresses and feel tired. In order to relieve their pressure, some people tend to choose some amusements that can help them feel better, such as watching the film, reading the book, and doing some exercises. Nevertheless, there are some divergences among some groups of people, thereby causing sorts of discussions. Based on people’s basic knowledge and experience, some people consider that it is better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises. From my point of view, I agree with this statement.
To begin with, reading books and watching the film can help people feel relaxed.
First of all, reading books can make people’s bodies feel relaxed. When people tend to read the book, they can primarily choose a cleaner environment and quieter atmosphere. Then, they can also sit down on the sofa or bed when they are ready to read a book for a long time. During the process of reading, people can gradually immerse in the attractive plots of books in a prefect circumstance. After a long time reading without doing other things, people will not only absorb abundant knowledge, but also gradually relieve people’s physical stresses during the process of sitting and resting. In the end, people will feel relaxed when they end the reading.
Moreover, watching the film can make people’s mentalities feel relaxed. When people tend to watch some of their favorite films, they can choose to watch with their friends. During the process of watching, people can have lots of interesting and funny discussions about the plots in the movies. Exchanging amusing ideas and statements, people will gradually divert their mind from heavier pressures. Not only that, when people are seeing some touching plots that are very similar to some realities in their daily life, people will also feel comfortable and relaxed. In the end, people will feel relaxed when they finish their watching. Therefore, it is logical to say that reading books and watching the film can make people feel relaxed.
In addition, doing some exercises cannot help people feel relaxed.
First of all, doing some exercises will bring too much physical stress to people.
After long time working, most of people will feel tired and weary. When people still do some drastic exercises, such as long distance-running, basketball, and ping-pong, they will waste lots of energies, which may be beyond their bodies’ extent of bearing. After drastic exercising, people’s bodies might feel pain and uncomfortable, making people cannot feel relaxed, even more tried and weary. Hence, doing some exercises will make people’s bodies bear lots of stresses.
Moreover, doing some exercises will bring lots of mental stresses to people. As for some people, they might focus on their working and studying during all day time. After that, when they insist doing some exercises, like swimming and climbing, they have to concentrate on these sports again, which brings extra stresses to their tiried mentalities. Not only that, when they cannot refocus on these sports, they might encounter some risks, like drowning or falling down, which will make them get some horrible memories and even injury. For these things, people will also feel anxious and scared, which will also bring lots of mental pressure to their mind.
Hence, it is logical to say that doing some exercises cannot help people feel relaxed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ss to people. After long time working, most of people will feel tired and weary. When people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, as for, in addition, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 32.0 9.8082437276 326% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3020.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 585.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16239316239 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9180050066 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47409192129 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413675213675 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 871.2 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.967363614 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28125 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46875 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19686886005 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748452380318 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879451961245 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13189246114 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623524848093 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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