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Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost.

With the era of Information approaching, the Internet is playing a more and more essential role during people’s life and work. A lot of social infrastructures cannot function normally without the Internet. The significance of the Internet brings about the question whether the government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost or not. Based on people’s own knowledge and experience, they give various kinds of opinions towards this question. Some of them think government should offer internet access to all citizens at no cost, with which the other people strongly disagree As far as I am concerned, the government should not offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost.

To begin with, the government should not offer internet access to all the citizens.
First of all, the Internet has a negative influence on the young teenagers. With the development of the Internet, various kinds of information spreads on the the Internet, which consists of pornographic and violent information. Lacking of mature knowledge and experience system, juvenile are easily affected by the information. Being addicted into the pornographic information, juvenile cannot focus their minds on the teachers anymore, which leads to a result that they miss all the important information the teachers lectured. With time passing, they accumulate a lot of problems, which leads to a result that they fail to pass exams. Meanwhile, violent information makes juvenile become aggressive. Assimilating so much violent information on the the Internet and they will mistakenly consider fighting a cool thing. When they have disagreement with their classmates, fighting against with other people will be their prime solution instead of a peaceful discussion. The unhealthy information severely affect juvenile’s development.
In addition, offering the Internet access to the aged will cause a waste of internet resource. The Internet is of complex operation system so that the aged do not know how to use the Internet correctly because of lacking the relevant knowledge. Also, they are reluctant to study the relevant skills to the Internet. Under such a situation, if the government still offers the Internet access to the aged, it is a great waste of the Internet resource.

On top of that, the government should not offer internet access to citizens at no cost.
For one thing, it will increase a country’s financial pressure. Usually, a country consists of millions people at least. Offering so many people internet access for free will take up a great part of a country’s financial expense. And also, offering internet access to citizens does not simply mean installing a internet device in citizens’ house. In order to keep the internet stable, government has to hire professional engineers to debug internet at intervals . When citizens’ internet devices break down, government needs to offer them a new one. All these services cost the government too much, which will increase a country’s financial pressure. Under such a situation, the government cannot squeeze plenty of finance to invest in a country’s infrastructures like transportation and medical system.
What’s more, there is no need for government to offer free internet access to citizens. With the rapid development of society, various kinds of occupations are available for people to choose. People’s personal wealth has been greatly enhanced with their hard working. They do have to competence to afford the internet fee. So, government should not offer free internet access to citizens.

Admittedly, offering internet access to all citizens at no cost brings people a lot of benefits. Firstly, it can have people save a lot of money, which could be used to improve people’s life quality. They could use this part of money to bur much nutritious food. Keeping a healthy diet, they will gain enough energy to carry out the whole day’s work and study. And also, they can use to money to offer their children a better education, which ensures their kids to enter into a famous college.

Although, offering internet access to all citizens at no cost brings people a lot of benefits. I consider it will cause much negative influence on government’s finance and the juvenile’s development. Therefore, I still hold the opinion that government should not offer all citizens internet access at no cost.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
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...t access to all of citizens at no cost. To begin with, the government should not...
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...various kinds of information spreads on the the Internet, which consists of pornographi...
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...ids to enter into a famous college. Although, offering internet access to all citize...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, still, therefore, while, as to, at least, in addition, first of all, for one thing, to begin with, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 103.0 52.1666666667 197% => OK
Nominalization: 45.0 8.0752688172 557% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3706.0 1977.66487455 187% => OK
No of words: 701.0 407.700716846 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28673323823 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.14552277128 4.48103885553 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92007921239 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416547788873 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1130.4 618.680645161 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 20.6003584229 199% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5473367699 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3902439024 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0975609756 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48780487805 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484249712236 0.236089414692 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142540099932 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160211356717 0.0737576698707 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315632652945 0.150856017488 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152621892657 0.0645574589148 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 86.8835125448 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, still, therefore, while, as to, at least, in addition, first of all, for one thing, to begin with, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments