Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The reading students do on their own is as important as or even more important than the reading assigned by their teachers

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The reading students do on their own is as important as, or even more important than the reading assigned by their teachers.

To begin with, instructors can select more useful books that can help students with their study. As for teachers, a majority of them are very professional, they already have abundant helpful and useful experience to help students select some types of books that can bring some instructive effects to students with their study. For example, most universities’ professors are wiling to arrange some books to students after classes, since they know their students’ condition of studying, such as their weaknesses and strong points. Before assign several books, professors may carefully make lots of choices among different sorts of books and finally give several specific materials to students, which depend on a great number of students’ different foibles and characters. Reading and understanding lots of books that are arranged by their professors, most students will gradually discover some faults and successfully make their best efforts to get some breakthroughs with their weaknesses, and acquire better study results in their future.
In addition, reading several books that arranged by teachers can help students relieve their pressures. For a great amounts of students, they have to deal with tons of assignments, papers, and examinations. Hence, it is difficult for them to divert their mind to other aspects, just like attempting to select some books and read. For a instance, there are lots of high schools students standing up hundreds of papers and examinations in my country. As for them, none want to waste time on selecting books or making faults. When they try to choose some books and read, they might select some unrelated books and make lots of faults. Afterward, if they still concentrate on these wrong materials, they will never acquire any useful knowledge that can help them deal with the heavier school works.Therefore, it is unquestionably waste students lots of time. Compared with that, if high school instructors can arrange special books to students, it can completely solve students’ inconveniences of choosing books. In the end, students will not only relieve their pressure, but also timely successfully accomplish their school works.

Thus, I consider students should read abundant books which assigned by their own teachers.

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Average: 7.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, as for, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41690140845 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8343459844 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529577464789 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.405626527 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.2 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216032503481 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969938868677 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728904922315 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194945060661 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040488622986 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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