Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie, while others prefer to watch the movie before reading the book. Which one do you prefer.
Diverse entertainments are crucial part for modern people’s daily life, such as reading novels, watching movies, and so on. In fact, a great number of excellent movies are recomposed from the books. Hence, the sequence of reading original book or watching movies become a puzzles among some groups of people. From my point of view, I consider the best option for me is to watch the movie at first.
To begin with, watching the movie at first time will save lots of time. Unquestionably, the time of viewing some movies are relatively shorter than a original book. As for some busy workers who have tremendous workloads every day, it is helpful for them to watch some amusing movies to relieve their pressure rather than spending their rest time to read a book. For example, my sisters who have been working in hospital like always reliving her heavier pressure by enjoying some meaningful movies, given she usually told me that she only can get 1 hours to have a rest. When she tend to do some thing after lots of surgeries and get few time to have a break, she admits that she will always willing to end her entertainments or other activities quickly and finally acquire better effect that can advantageously make she feel relaxed. Hence, she believes that reading the original book that contain huge plots is not a great option for her.
In addition, watching movie at the beginning time will also bring a great number of better experience for us. Unquestionably, modern movies have undergo lots of advancement and progresses than the past. As for modern directors and movie’s companies, most them already have enough skills and abilities to create truth and unbelievable picture that were depicted by the books, such as some landscapes from fiction books. In fact, there is no doubt that public will not only understand most stories about original books, but also view an increasing amount of astonishing pictures and scenes when they watch modern movies. For a instance, the famous movie which called ‘ Avatar’ have astonished most people during that period of time. The director James use lots of new techniques to create the 3D technologies and pictures. Afterward, he also utilizes them in the process of making movie. In the end, this movie make lots of unthinkable pictures in the movie, which people cannot experience if they just read the book. Nowadays, people have to acknowledge that this improvements are adapt in most people’s habits and most them tend to view some 3D movies in the camera, since that technologies can bring lots of valuable and mysterious experience than reading the books.
In conclusion, given the advantage of time saving and meaningful experience, I believe that watching the movies first would be the smart way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a puzzle' or simply 'puzzles'?
Suggestion: a puzzle; puzzles
...original book or watching movies become a puzzles among some groups of people. From my po...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...some movies are relatively shorter than a original book. As for some busy workers...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...an get 1 hours to have a rest. When she tend to do some thing after lots of surgerie...
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Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...urs to have a rest. When she tend to do some thing after lots of surgeries and get few tim...
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Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...e thing after lots of surgeries and get few time to have a break, she admits that she wi...
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Line 3, column 821, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...effect that can advantageously make she feel relaxed. Hence, she believes that readi...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'undergone'.
Suggestion: undergone
... us. Unquestionably, modern movies have undergo lots of advancement and progresses than...
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Line 5, column 624, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...enes when they watch modern movies. For a instance, the famous movie which called...
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Line 5, column 716, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...have astonished most people during that period of time. The director James use lots of new tec...
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Line 5, column 1059, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...wadays, people have to acknowledge that this improvements are adapt in most people’s...
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Line 5, column 1081, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
... acknowledge that this improvements are adapt in most people’s habits and most them t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, so, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96559139785 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61583180276 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6901145163 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.45 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265424087038 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988192625492 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719164337425 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17739481633 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608965984418 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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