Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Competition between friends usually negatively impacts
friendships.
Friend plays an essential role in our whole life, thus intimate and sincere friendships can be seen as invaluable treasure. However, under the condition where is fraught with fierce competition, it is inevitable that sometimes such competition may exist among the friends. A considerable number of people consider that the competition between friends is detrimental to maintain their friendship, while others believe that friendship will be stable and solid regardless of competition. From my perspective, I am definitely in favor of the latter statement.
Admittedly, some people may concern that with the emergence of competition between close friends, their friendship will eventually collapse. Because taking into account the numerous benefits of winning the competition, no one will selfless. What’s worse, they may even conceal the truth or deceive each other. For example, if a person is competing with his intimate friend for the sake of a promising and high-paying occupation and they are the only two candidates. Coincidentally, his friend miss the information of the time of interview, will the men tell his friend when to meet the interviewer? Not exactly. At best he may disguise the information, at worse he is likely to tell his friend a fake time. Because the absence of his rival can ensure him to gain the profession. Hence, the aforementioned reasons may account for why many people asserts that the competition may ruin the friendship.
However, although everyone is somewhat selfish, I still believe that the merits of competition between friends far outweigh its drawbacks. Actually, proper competition between friends is conducive to the improvement of their professional skills since they will spare no effort to chase each other. For instance, if a basketball player is going to compete with his friend who is also the member in the team for the only opportunity to participate in a large sports game. In order to gain this valuable opportunity, they will get fully involved and do their utmost to win the contest due to their determination to perform themselves and to fight for the collective. As a result, their professional skills as well as willpower can all be enhanced. No matter who acquire the chance, it is undeniable that both of them have achieved dramatic progress during the process of competing. Hence, no one can overlook the great improvements brought by the competition between friends.
What’s more, not only can competition enable both of the friends to improve themselves, but it can also surprisingly enhance their friendship. People who are the same competent are more willing to admire and respect each other since they have so many useful ideas and experience to share. For instance, during the process of competition, they may discover that their competitor has the same perseverance and determination as himself. In most cases, having the same willing and desire provides a great topic for discussion. As the two are both desperately seeking for the same goal, an in-depth communication is more than likely. As a result, they can learn much from each other and their friendship will be consolidated.
In sum, although some people may hold the opinion that competition will exert negative impacts on the friendship, I definitely believe that competition between friends can improve their competence and also stabilize their friendship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 713, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... likely to tell his friend a fake time. Because the absence of his rival can ensure him...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, incidentally, look, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.0752688172 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2875.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 542.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30442804428 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0160454021 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50184501845 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 881.1 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7982272535 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.576923077 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19230769231 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165258446007 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458591051153 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048239736837 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113894349446 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509657343869 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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