In today's generation, people prefer adventurous life which are filled with momentous happiness, satisfactions and jovial. Various people have distinct prospective about spending money on travelling or saving for future, some people want to work hard and allocate fortunes for future while other wants to take the taste of present adventurous moment. As far as I m concerned, life is too short and it must be enjoyed with travelling different places without loosing this precious time.
At my first blush, people in the past tend to spend their entire life working assiduously, planning and saving coins for older days. For example, my grandfather have collected so much of fortunes and has owned many lands of his own. But, he is not healthy enough now to enjoy all those money and benefits. He has been laying in his hospital bed having enormous amount of money on his account. From his life, I have learned a big lesson that life is unpredictable and we should celebrate life at present as no body knows what the future holds.
Admittedly, people learns many thing from experience which are gained through travelling different locations. People are able to cope with different situations and obstacles thereby wandering various places. For supporting instance, I had an educational tour with my friends along with some professors, I had gone to the survey about the food needs for animals in husbandry thereof, and communicating with different pupil provide me an opportunity to understand theirs views and ideas. Hence, travelling different places adds knowledge and experienced in life.
In fact, research have proven that human hormones Adrenalin and Oxycontin are released through the adventurous event which are refers as happy hormones. Travelling different places helps to keep people happy, exciting and animated. Therefore, happiness is what all people wants in their life.
From the aforementioned ideas, I personally feel it is better to waste money on travelling and vacation rather than collecting them for future as it gives beautiful memory, happiness and knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
... is not healthy enough now to enjoy all those money and benefits. He has been laying in his...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
... we should celebrate life at present as no body knows what the future holds. Admitte...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...ure holds. Admittedly, people learns many thing from experience which are gained throug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29429429429 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77905497786 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60960960961 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6131384589 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1875 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218188247047 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652741814006 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629431611734 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126839711603 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716876650241 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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