Do you agree or disagree with the statement: it is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on this fact that lifestyle has been revolutionized since the preceding centuries, and spending travel as a prominent part of this spectrum, has played a pivotal role in every individual’s life. Due to its paramount importance, efforts for elevating its quality and effectiveness have been always amongst sociologists top priorities; this, however, has sparked off a heated debate about whether it is better to spend money on travelling and vacation or save money for the future. There does not exist a unanimous opinion toward this issue. While many are adamant that the former is more fruitful, others are inclined toward the opposite perspective. From my vantage point, spend money on traveling is of utmost importance and have its merits. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons.
The first and foremost reason to substantiate my standpoint is that by traveling you will experience as much as adventure you can. Before the modern era, because of world war uncertain circumstances and lower average income, people tried to save money as much as they can. Conversely, in recent decades we have seen an increase stability and higher income among societies. These changes lead to different attitudes toward easy and happiness life among individuals rather than before. In fact, People try to do whatever which make life more enjoyable and pleasant. Moreover, Scientists discover that adventurous lifestyle will rise body Adrenalin and this risen will secret Oxycontin which is the happiness hormone. So that, positive adventures which everybody faced with especially in travel can cause more happiness in life as a result.
Although there is lots of viewpoints in supporting merits of frugal lifestyle such as peace of mind in elderly ages, having enough money for different decisions like buying a house or etc., it just delineate a vague silhouette of the reality and are not cognizant of myriad benefits of living at the moment. Experiencing eye-catching or far distance places, different communities and etc. are not typical experience which everybody can have. Also, tangible results and statistics, drawn from an exhaustive psychological survey conducted by the University of Tehran indicate that people who have this chance to experience different culture in youth and middle age have better etiquette in citizenship roles rather than who never have such an experience.
Finally, it is indisputable fact that people who have traveled more have high ability to interact with other. So, traveling make them person with over social ability as well.
In winding up the discussion on this moot point, contemplating the aforementioned arguments, one can easily surmise that both of the given options stated in the topic can turn out to be advantageous. Nevertheless, that was a story in a nutshell; obviously, there are many details, worth discussing, which are not mentioned here. All in all, by new viewpoints which is happen recently toward life we can see increasing in number of people who spend whole of their life on traveling and vacation every day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2643.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25447316103 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90028504468 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58648111332 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 855.9 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8168907907 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.136363636 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8636363636 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215769688503 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524554711679 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685595335673 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108606127516 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06516243073 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 86.8835125448 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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