do you agree or disagree with the statement: it is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.
this concept has played a dominant role in individuals way of living. Though some people may hold the view that it is better to spend money on travelling and vacation, the most majority of people are of the opinion that save money for the future will be more reasonable. although this view point has some disadvantageous. for instance may take time or exhausting process. From my vantage point its benefits out weight the draw backs.
The first of all, one should take into account the fact that save money ensuring more relaxing life in the future. Although somebody criticize this view point and believe living on the moment is more advantageous, throughout history people with more money live in more wealthy situation. Who can deny the benefits of welfare and wealthy life?
The second reason that I would like to bring about is better decisions! Some important decisions directly related to amount of money you have. When you save enough money you can decide for way of spending much better. And also based on different situations and amount of money you have you can decide more logically.As everybody knows, better decisions will more satisfied individuals from their life.
Finally it is an indisputable fact save money can lead to peace of mind. Without shadow of doubt, the more money you have the more relaxation you feel.while living at the moment is adventurous and easily can tempt everybody, live with guarantee of existing money will be more beautiful in the long run. Imagine 60th decade of life without money. how dreadful it will be hf there were no money? saving money in youth paved the way for welfare in middle age.
To make short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to conclusion that it is better for people to save money as much as they can rather than spending money on temporarily joyful event which even can waste of money in somehow. Although there are some reasons and and examples challenging this claim which could be mentioned, due to dearth of time are not embraced. all in all I finally suggest save money to all individuals who wants easier and wealthier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, second, so, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85041551247 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.513779827 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518005540166 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3560488009 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1578947368 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351470444555 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113116435418 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969324800741 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205658797769 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533057017433 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.