Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. “Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was your grandparents were children”.
Nowadays, in today’s life, after a lot of important discoveries and experiments in the field of sociology, sociologists found that despite all obstacles which exist in modern life style, today's` life is easier and more comfortable than it was in past. In what follow, I will elaborate on my view point.
The most significant reason which explicitly can mention is advent of new technologies such as internet, which lead to more accessible information. Without shadow of doubt existence of internet create a new trend between people so that they can search on their issues wherever and whenever they want. Although Internet make people lonelier, its merits overweight demerits.
Another equally important point is convenient infrastructures. In past days people should take long distance path to go to anywhere. During this long journey they endanger their lives by theft, wild animals and other obstacles which may face with. Nowadays, because of development in science, some new inventions lead to better transportation which cause saving time and life much more than past. Indeed, by these new kinds of amenities people are more safe and convenient rather than before. Obviously they can Saving more time and visiting more places, by short distance travel. While new modern amenities make life more complicated in somehow, it enables people to enjoy their life entirely.
So, to summarize all the main points mentioned above, modern technologies and its effects on individual’s life is undeniable. Undoubtedly development in infrastructures has a significant role in preserving life, time and also has opened new ways of transportation to people. In fact, the more development happen in technology the easier life we can experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...easier and more comfortable than it was in past. In what follow, I will elaborate on my...
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Suggestion:
...nelier, its merits overweight demerits. Another equally important point is conve...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: Save
... rather than before. Obviously they can Saving more time and visiting more places, by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44322344322 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06909434893 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1753412842 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143101813511 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446062329118 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567096749806 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983942943021 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828153135369 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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