Do you agree or disagree with the statement that Living of today is more comfortable than that of our grandparents in children" give specific examples and details to support you ideas.
There is no shortage of debate about whether it is worthwhile of living nowadays is better comfort and easier for lives of our grandparents in childhood. In my opinion, I firmly believe that Today's children are very lucky because they are provided with many facilities which were not available at the time of grandparents( when they were a child). I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, Education is one of the integral parts of human life which was hard to get at the time grandparents. At present, children have access to educations with many facilities. For example, a few decades ago, there were no schools in our village. There was one school in our district and people had to walked many hours to reached the school. Furthermore, many people couldn't attend school because of being far from the home. According to my grandparents, he had to move for five hours o reach the school. He also mentioned that some people can afford to make room for rent; however, He couldn't due to his family condition was not strong financially. This example that it was really hard to acquire knowledge at the time of my grandparents. On the other hand, it is easy to get to school. Many private schools provide education to all the people. They have also bus services so that children shouldn't have to walk for a long time. This illustration shows that it has become easy to get an education which was not at the time of my grandparents. Secondly, health is another most indispensable part of a human to which we have to take care most. Today's children are conscious about their health; although, it was hardly a few years ago. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When my grandparents were children, he got a great health problem. There were no hospitals in our village. People even couldn't get a chance to take small medicine. As far as I heard, my grandparents did not see doctors. In contrast to me, when I was a child, I got a great health problem. At the same time, my parents took me to the hospital. As a result, I became well soon and get started my job, To sum up, all the pieces of evidence that I put forth in the above passages are highly convincing and supportive to my statement to which I take the position. This is because education and health facilities are strong enough that today's children are using; meanwhile, it was not available at the time of our grandparents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i feel, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5799086758 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69394009467 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477168949772 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.761762528 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1538461538 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109036079069 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330798488193 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366594115577 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109036079069 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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