There is no shortage of debate about whether it is worthwhile of living nowadays is better comfort and easier with respect to lives of our grandparents in childhood. In my opinion, I firmly believe that Today's children are very lucky because they are provided with many facilities which were not available at the time of grandparents( when they were a child). I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, Education is one of the integral parts of human life which was hard to get at the time grandparents. At present, children have access to educations with many facilities. For example, a few decades ago, there was no school in our village. There was one school in our district and people had to walked many hours to reached the school. Furthermore, many people couldn't attend school because of being far from the home. According to my grandparents, he had to move for five hours o reach the school. He also mentioned that some people can afford to take a room on rent; however, He couldn't due to his family condition was not strong financially. This example that it was really hard to acquire knowledge at the time of my grandparents.
On the other hand, it is easy to get to school. There are many private schools that provide education to all the people. They have also bus services so that children shouldn't have to walk for a long time. This illustration shows that it has become easy to get an education which was not at the time of my grandparents.
Secondly, health is another most indispensable part of humans to which we have to take care most. Today's children are conscious about their health; although, it was hardly a few years ago. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When my grandparents were children, he got a great health problem. There were no hospitals in our village. People even couldn't get a chance to take small medicine. As far as I heard, my grandparents did not see doctors. In contrast to me, when I was a child, I got a great health problem. At the same time, my parents took me to the hospital. As a result, I became well soon and get started my job,
To sum up, all the pieces of evidence that I put forth in the above passages are highly convincing and supportive to my statement to which I take the position. This is because education and health facilities are strong enough that today's children are using; meanwhile, it was not available at the time of our grandparents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i feel, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5914221219 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68612591561 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474040632054 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2497343809 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2307692308 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0384615385 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.19230769231 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0288240038696 0.236089414692 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00916050063559 0.076458572812 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0143081037064 0.0737576698707 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0200883286351 0.150856017488 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143777039164 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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