Do you agree or disagree? Teachers should not involve their students with their political view or social interaction.
It is undoubtedly true that teachers, as experienced adults, can allow students to learn by sharing current affairs and social phenomena with them; however, doing so does more harm than good.Most importantly, I definitely believe that students should be hindered from learning about their professors political views and social interactions for several reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
First and foremost, these days, students are so insouciant that any discussion aside from their academics disrupts their way of life.So in other words, when they get exposed to things like politics and social interactions they get distracted and lose concentration which in turn results in poor performance with homework and examinations.My personal experience is a clear illustration of this.My little brother has always been on to of his class for the past three years. During his fourth year, I discovered his performance had dropped.I was perplexed to the extent that i took it up to visit him.From my findings I was able to deduce that her professor had been replaced,and hat the new lecturer spend much of the time sharing her thought with politics in the United states politics with the class.Her ideology was to create a sense of humor to in order to lighten the classroom atmosphere. However, this has resulted in students losing focus with their classroom activities. If she hadn't introduced politics to the students my little one wouldn't have gotten distracted.This example simply demonstrates the effect of engaging students with political issues.
Secondly,students could be fed with false information because they see their lecturers as role models which is why many of them get into fights with their parents.To be more specific,they confide so much in them such that they tend to be obtuse to other people's views.Drawing from my own experience, this same cousin of my goes into ton of argument with his mother whenever she tries to tell her about the past mayor of the state of Idaho.Because his teacher had fed him with lies he never believed his mum.His histrionic is quite alarming to the point of starving himself for some couple of days.If the teacher had not provide such misleading information, he would not be quarreling with his mum.With this, it is certainly clear to see why students should not be involved with the social and political views of their teachers.
Furthermore,students tend to disrespect their teachers because of the social interactions.In Fact, some students might just play on the teachers intelligence because they feel they now share the same views and opinions in life.My neighbours son always abscond from school because the teacher has stoop so low to the fact he goes on to tell the class about the party he attended and some other irrelevant talks.And as a results, students no longer accord respect to him.Therefore they misbehaved while in class.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that students should stay away from their lecturer's political view and social interaction.This is because it makes them lose focus, and because it provides them with false information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2647.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 509.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20039292731 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9744908683 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534381139489 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.1344086022 313% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.360551561 48.9658058833 444% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 330.875 100.406767564 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.625 20.6045352989 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.125 5.45110844103 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.5376344086 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348114398439 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173711613216 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598310934541 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212199474742 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041413774652 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 11.7677419355 297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 58.1214874552 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.1575268817 263% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.0537634409 271% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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