Do you agree or disagree on whether life is easy today when compared to our grandparents when they were kids?
I was wondering how hard it was to live in the 1930s when my grandparents were children? It is difficult to imagine live without wifi or any other device we have nowadays. it must be painful and also boring. My grandparents lived in a small village in the countryside. They always reminds me that I live in a live with so many resources that they think it is too comfortable for us.
Surely, it was during post-war period back then when my grandparents were kids. We were being conquered by japan at the time, which means that we could only shared limited resources after most of the food were being exported to japan. Even rice, our major food, were not enough for a family with four people. Things could not be worse if you could not live.
Moreover, wifi or even internet was not invented yet. people could not make a video call by a single tap and swipe just like us. They need to write letters to communicate with each others. Every single reply could take weeks compared with seconds these days. Or if they want to see each other, they had to write a letter to make an appointment and then take a bus to the meeting site. Life was far from comfortable in the 1930s.
Last but not least, the laws back then were not enough to protect the labor force. Many people died because of working day and night without resting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4612244898 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27512122602 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5673531738 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2941176471 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4117647059 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166385616233 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471836257087 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445767075611 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870703181043 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422892398312 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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