Do you agree or disagree?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
In recent years, the issue of whether universities should have pay equal financial support for sports and social activities as libraries and classes has received a great deal of attention. Although some many argue that universities are a place for education, many others believe that sports is a necessary activity for students.
First of all, an important reason why sport and social activities are crucial is that he physical activities are important for mental health. Some experts claimed that people whom do not have certain physical activities in their daily routine life will be faced to some diseases such as heart attack and the may have a sooner death.
A further reason for this view is that sports could entertain students and make a happy life for them. Students, such all the people in the world, need some joyful time. It is commonly said that by entertaining students with sports and social activities, the inclination for using drugs would be degraded. Because the time they might spending on drugs would be spent by social activities.
Finally, it is occasionally said that the principle of establishing universities is based on education and the other activities may distract students from their fundamental job. Most experts believe that the free time of students should be consumed by researching and accomplishing new ideas which spending this time by sports might be an obstruction for them.
In conclusion, considering the ideas presented above, personally believe that the importance sports are as the same as libraries and this department should receive equal financial support. Chiefly due to the urgency of having healthy mind and keeping students away from drugs reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2299270073 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7411091681 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3732988779 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260959382684 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10078176689 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114464582857 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155456519757 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893036459279 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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