The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world
Undoubtedly, the internet is a chief part of the contemporary civilization brought to the human beings by the unquenchable thirst for an easier life. As a result of this very great invention, passing and obtaining information, regardless of time and location, has had an unprecedented improvement. Better chances for peace is the major impact that is about to be highlighted in the essay.
An Australian can readily text his friend located thousands of kilometers away in Brazil, asking about the weather condition, political situation, painting a wall and literally anything. Whatever information you think can be shared in person is sharable through the internet. Such distances could have prevented instant and efficient communications if it was not for the internet. People can share their values and get accustomed to another's. There is a lower risk of the fight once the involving parties have a better understanding of one another. Peace is the product of dialogue amongst various cultures and civilizations. Discussions can be easier conducted to break the stereotypes. History of wars is now available to the public. Thanks to the abundant information available to the public, nations are reluctant to go to wars, since they're mostly aware of the devastating consequences.
In case of an ongoing war, activists can spread the word to the international communities in order to decrease the tension between the sides involved. United Nation, as an instance, has humanitarian committees to help the civilians provide shelters and food. UN can also use the means of communication to warn innocent people so as to help them escape the war zones.
In conclusion, viral information plays an apparent role in linking people and laying the groundwork for making peace. Compared to the past, public knowledge has significantly improved due to information provided by the internet. Due to the widespread use of the internet, not only the world knows what is at stake and why it should do its best to avoid violence but also how to decrease the bad effects caused by an ongoing war.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17455621302 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07783469654 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62426035503 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.482556203 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154456043544 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423766510257 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413684840433 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872009196425 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570073048686 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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