Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that society changes in a way that prepare young people to identify the true way of living and make decisions by themselves. Young people are becoming more and more independent in decision making from their parents. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that today young people are still so dependent to their parents, because they highly are cared by parents in the childhood period and it leads to they become emotionally and intellectually dependent to them. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that today young people are better able to make decisions about own lives than young people were to do it in the past.
First and foremost, today most people between the age of 20 to 30 have an academic education. At university, people know about different social and political viewpoints, social problems and its solutions. For example, when I studied at university, I participate in varieties of psychological programs, such as emotional control, social relationship and self-analysis. Besides, communication with different people and listening to the professors' experience could give a lot of valuable knowledge that can be guided us in decision making.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that today educational system and parents training children to be independent in decision making. For this aim, parents try to give freedom to children and encourage them to make basic decisions about their interesting things, in order to improve the self-confidence of children. For instance, children are free to select which kinds of clothes to buy or wear.
Finally, yet importantly, today young people travel to different countries or areas very more that past. In the past most people lived in small cities or villages and their relationship were limited to their family and few friends. Whereby, they had not an opportunity to obtain information and experience. Therefore, parents were only and a solid source of information to them. In those societies, young people got advice from older people in their family about important decisions. In spite of it, today the transportation revolution provide the possibility of easy travelling around the world.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that in the past, young people dependent too much on their parents to make decisions for them than young ones now. Because of the educational status of societies, and preparing children for independent living from early ages, and because of changes in living style and more travelling to different regions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in spite of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25531914894 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88961233411 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517730496454 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3642686514 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.560065583278 0.236089414692 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156688369046 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141433883016 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295444944611 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148472493031 0.0645574589148 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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