Do you agree or disagree?
It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise
Nowadays, people should more pay attention to their health's body than before because society has been changed completely during these years. Actually, in modern society people have less time to relax, so they must choose a way to rest that has more high-efficiency to them in the shortest time. In my opinion, exercise can provide better conditions for them but others believe that staying in the home and watching TV is the best method, which I disagree with this statement. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, physical activities like running or playing football cause negative energy to release from the body. The releasing energy makes a good condition for the brain; actually, the mind is free from everything which has a bad effect on it. So, the brain is in the normal status and in this situation the person can relax without any problem. To further illustration, I want to speak about personal history. Last month, I had a busy week because my project was defective and I had to complete it before the deadline. The condition had caused I could not concentrate on my other works, better to say that I confused. Consequently, after one week I went to go to an adviser and explained my situation. He told me that, I should relax five days and after that, I can continue my research without any concerns, also he mentioned that running is a method that can help I have a better feeling. His statement was true because I did exercise every day, and after a while, I attained my concentration and finished my project in its deadline. As you can see, some activities like running have positive effects on the mind and can be a useful way to rest.
Secondly, exercise can improve health's body in a long time. When people do exercise, the metabolism system function increase then this event reinforces the immune system. The strong immune system puts the body in the best and most relaxed mode. Therefore, if we want to have a calm mind, we have to exercise every day because this is an effective method to relax. As a result, the healthy body can help to rest provided that we have a regular exercise program.
In conclusion, taking all the reasons and examples into account, I believe that exercise is the most effective way to relax because it has numerous positive impacts, which each of them can play a vital role in relaxes process.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74401913876 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62264795951 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543062200957 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5493536966 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.15 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136936156507 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364916692805 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295555743699 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839542151284 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168319901932 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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