My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer
Comparative lifestyle between past and now is the most important issue that these days everyone speak about it. personally, thought, I believe that life in the world which we now live on it is easier than recent years. I fell this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, at the moment people live in the modern society, which over ninety percent of life is machinery. In the past people lived in a situation which every things was taken by hand, but now people have a better life than last periods. I remember that when I was a childhood my parents had an arduous life. Those days our home warmed by petroleum, so my father every days in the cold weather went to a supermarket that was located far from our house and bought five liter soil, then when my parent reached to home, my mother transferred the petroleum to the heater. Hitherto, I talk about the example which relate to lifestyle in the past, but I now write about the modern lifestyle. I live in an apartment which warm by modern technology that called floor heating which rate hot of this system control by remote. This technology managed by specific company which has a many technicians. The company every month in the cold seasons, dispatch their experts to houses for to check the connection of floor heating, If technicians see a problem without any cash start to repair the system. As you can see, lifestyle has changed in these years, and day by day is improving
secondly, in the past people worked everyday and do not had a enough time for recreations. Actually, people in the last periods do not had electronic assistant, thus<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre=""></span> they had to worked full-time, therefore, lifestyle in the past was very difficult for them. For instance, when I was a kid, my father went to his office everyday and when he got back to the home we slept. My parent had to strive every day, because in that time every tasks manipulated by hand, and they do not had a computer or intelligent system which helped them, but, now days conditions has changed qua small jobs managed by advanced computer. Years go by, my father likewise work, but, no like the past. His office developed and most of the tasks handle with computer, so, my father and his colleagues can work part-time. These days my father has time to play gulf with his friends, also he can run tasks of the office with a software that he have on the tablet, therefore, he has a more time to relax in the home. This example shows lifestyle in the recent years has modified which makes life is easier for people.
In conclusion, I powerfully believe that lifestyle is comfortable for people than last years. This is because these days most of the toils handled by technology, and this is because people in modern society have more time for other activities which make they have an enjoyable time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...se years, and day by day is improving secondly, in the past people worked everyday and...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...g secondly, in the past people worked everyday and do not had a enough time for recrea...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t people worked everyday and do not had a enough time for recreations. Actually, ...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...was a kid, my father went to his office everyday and when he got back to the home we sle...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which make they have an enjoyable time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71037181996 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90350424378 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481409001957 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.906015024 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.619047619 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150889249837 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513262666901 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381103522055 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909284957713 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266326767517 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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