Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents
experienced when they were young.” Use specific details and examples to
support your answer.
There has always been a significant difference in life style among people of different generations. Personally, I believe the more we go back in time the harder life becomes, and it has never been as easy as it is right now. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, in the past there was specific sequence of tasks that must have been fulfilled at a special age. To be more specific, it was preset for almost all the children to educate till what age, to get marry at what age and so on. Most of these stringent steps were imposed on people by the folklore of the hometown. However, nowadays, parent can barely have control on their kid’s clothes, let alone their education and marriage. This freedom gave the teenagers and youngsters impetus to decide for their own future. There are assortment options for each individual with any kind of interest right now. For instance, when I graduated from high school, I decided to continue my education in electrical engineering major. In contrast, my grand mother has never had the right to choose between educating and marriage, and marriage was prevailed upon her.
Moreover, we live in intelligence era and we can learn anything we intend to. A few decades ago, it wasn’t this easy to learn everything. The literate people were scarce and school weren’t in any neighborhood. Thus, only people who were so enthusiast about learning a subject and had the opportunity to pursue his wishes, was capable of achieving it. On the other hand, nowadays there are even some online colleges with flexible timelines that let people educate and work at the same time.
In conclusion, people of the recent vintage have been blessed by technology and so many of the infeasible goals became an ordinary part of life, plus today people are not afraid of defying traditions so they can live their life in a way they want.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, even so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76276276276 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56698270563 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615615615616 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2339934342 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2941176471 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801987427795 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248023703432 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212719391542 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422786593082 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210195570516 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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