Do you agree that you can purchase everything from a large store than purchasing things from the shops which are specialized in those shops ?
We need many things apart for our daily life. And while purchasing these items, we always look for our profit. In order to maximize our profit, we go from one shop to another and often search for the quality which suits us best. I totally disagree with the statement that ' we purchase everything from a large store rather than purchasing things from the shops which are particularly designed in those shops .'
When we buy items from specialized shops, the quality is better. The designers or artisans in those stores will be highly trained and skilled towards the designing of that specific product. Large stores, which are not specialized in design of any elemental product, rarely have a quality that can much the items of previously mentioned shops. As a result, these specialized shops have highly trustworthy items, which can remain undamaged for a long time.
Also, there may be times when we buy some cheap article from a very large shop. The article bought was not of high quality. And it became damaged and then useless, only after a short period of time. Then we will certainly feel the need to buy the same item again. As we are buying the same item repeatedly. Also, it must be costly as large stores do not give articles at a cheap rate. So ultimately, this is increasing our expenditure.
For instance, few years back when I was shopping to buy myself two pairs of foot-wears. One I bought from a very large store, which was selling clothes, accessories, sports items etc. Other I bought from a well known brand, which only design shoes. The former one became useless after some weeks. While the latter one continued till three to four years.
To sum up, I would just say that we have to be very careful while buying ourselves items. There are many fake companies available that are ready to cheat the customers. Specialized shops will provide us with quality materials and will leave us with satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79341317365 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4492605528 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.468143699 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6086956522 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5217391304 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306973232986 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786952015339 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113672871881 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163506227377 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10439247679 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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