Do you prefer to do one job or several jobs support your answer with opinions and examples
Have employment and choosing a career plays an integral role in a person's life because it helps people to be successful. Many of us ponder over the disadvantages of not having enough their life and are worried over it scrupulously. Though there are different schools of thought where some people prefer to stick with one career throughout their life while others choose to do multiple jobs to achieve their goals. In my opinion, doing multiple jobs has a myriad of advantages which I will explore in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, doing many jobs will provide the people the opportunity to have a vast variety of experience which is extremely beneficial for them. As when employees are working with a certain company, the company usually gives training to their employees to enhance the efficiency of their work and teach them technical skills. Those skills and knowledge are a big asset for the employees. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I started to work as a pharmacist five years ago I was not trained enough but my supervisor provided me with the training to boost my skills and the techniques which I learned from that training I used for my other part-time manager job. If I had not done different jobs I would not have able to make a good impression on my other job. Therefore, performing multiple jobs help a person to grow his knowledge.
Moreover, doing multiple jobs supports an individual financially which raises his status in society. In our society money became the standard of respect and admiration. On the contrary, people who do a single job can not make themselves financially stable as most of the companies do not pay high wages to their employees. For instance, five years ago, I was working as a pharmacist in a local pharmacy. I was unable to bear the expenses of my family and I was not felt respected In my social circle. Later on, I applied for another part-time job, in the evening. Thankfully, now I can earn enough that I bought a lavish car and started to live in the high-rank area of my town. Amazingly, my society started to give me respect too. To conclude, having multiple employments make folks financially strong in society.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I'm convinced that doing multiple jobs will not only provide the person to have a variety of experiences but it will also help them to be financially stable.
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...upervisor provided me with the training to boost my skills and the techniques which I le...
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...sed for my other part-time manager job. If I had not done different jobs I would n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78554216867 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79686903728 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510843373494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2161397464 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247085112434 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731484767775 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079771426087 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153444211253 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293760323838 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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