Do you prefer to do one job or several jobs support your answer with opinions and examples
Have employment and choosing a career plays an integral role in a person’s life because it helps people to be successful. Many of us ponder over the disadvantages of not having enough of their life and are worried over it scrupulously. Though there are different schools of thought where some people prefer to stick with one career throughout their life while others choose to do multiple jobs to achieve their goals. In my opinion, doing multiple jobs has a myriad of advantages which I will explore in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, doing many jobs will provide the people the opportunity to have a vast variety of experience which is extremely beneficial for them. As when employees are working with a certain company, the company usually gives training to their employees to enhance the efficiency of their work and teach them technical skills. Those skills and knowledge are a big asset for the employees. My experience is a compelling example of this. When I worked as a pharmacist five years ago I was not trained enough, but my supervisor provided me with the training to boost my skills and the techniques which I learned from that training I used for my other part-time manager job. If I had not done different jobs, I would not have able to make a good impression on my other job. So, performing multiple jobs helps a person to grow his knowledge.
Secondly, doing multiple jobs supports an individual financially, which raises his status in society. In our society, money became the standard of respect and admiration. On the contrary, people who do a single job can not make themselves financially stable, as most of the companies do not pay high wages to their employees. For instance, five years ago, I was working as a pharmacist in a local pharmacy. I could not bear the expenses of my family therefore was not respected In my social circle. Later on, I applied for another part-time job in the evening. Thankfully, now I can earn enough that I bought a lavish car and lived in the high-rank area of my town. Amazingly, my society gave me respect too. To conclude, having multiple employments make folks financially strong in society.
Lastly, when a person performs many duties, it helps them to interact and make new friends because person get a chance to meet with all sort of people and can expand their social circle by making new friends. On the other hand, people who do one job get to see a limited number of colleagues and hence couldn’t develop and flourish relationships.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I’m convinced that doing multiple jobs will not only offer the person to have a variety of experiences, but it will also help him be financially stable. Moreover, it will strengthen his relationships in the community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e and are worried over it scrupulously. Though there are different schools of thought ...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: boosting
...upervisor provided me with the training to boost my skills and the techniques which I le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, sort of, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81669027155 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516806722689 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0918360537 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.20833333333 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247588144154 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696286548323 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078313420367 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139769312771 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330044911322 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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