Do you prefer watching TV programs for knowledge or just for entertainment?
In today's modern and sophisticated world, people allocate a tremendous amount of time to watch TV. In this connection, each person has a different goal when they watch TV shows. Although contested by many that the matter of watching TV programs improves one's knowledge is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded as both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I concur with the notion that it can be a plus when a person watches TV for fun, and I will analyze my reasons throughout this essay.
First, nowadays, people feel a considerable amount of stress, and by watching TV as entertainment, they can escape from daily crises. To be more specific, by increasing social problems, people should deal with countless obstacles in life, so they need the entertainment to make them relax, and TV is an object which provides an enjoyable time for them. According to my own experience, I work eight hours a day at the company. After finishing work, I should participate in a master class, leading to tiredness feelings when I arrive home. Accordingly, I need to relax time to forget about my daily tensions, and TV shows give me an ideal opportunity to not think about my future tasks.
Second, entertainment can strengthen families' binding, and TV is available and free entertainment; thus, families should dedicate time to watch televisions. To elucidate, people are busy today, and they hardly find a suitable time to have outdoor fun with families; however, TV is an accessible entertainment and allows families to spend time together. For example, my brother and my father had a weak relationship as they did not carry out mutual activities together; therefore, they have decided to spend two hours a day together by watching TV. When they have watch TV, they have a chance to talk about programs' characters and movie topics; by doing so, they realize each others' visions. Moreover, they have spent more than two hours a day with each other since their discussions have to take a wealth of time. Therefore, they know each other's interests more than before, and it improves their relationships.
To conclude, while there are several arguments on each side, I profoundly believe that TV is great entertainment. Not only do people cope with their mental tensions when they watch a program, but they also have effective communication with those who watch TV with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90991564006 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561097256858 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2513375596 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.941176471 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223440980072 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748475672322 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521348661349 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153761687386 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476753481842 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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