Do you prefer watching TV programs for knowledge or just for entertainment?
Nowadays, we are overwhelmed by a great variety of TV channels which provide their audiences with appealing programs. Definitely, some people prefer to enjoy watching TV program to develop their knowledge, while others choose entertaining programs. As far as I am concerned, I prefer watching amusing channels. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to advocate my point of view.
The first vital point to be mentioned is that these programs assist me to relieve my stress. After a long day of working or study when I arrived home, I need to do something to let my hair down. One of the best ways for setting our mind free is watching the interesting program like a talk show and comedy films, as this kind of programs are created to help people to get away from hustle and bustle of daily life by showing them some funny situation. For instance, Khandevane is Iranian funny program and have the most viewers among all program and it is being watched by more than half of people in my country according to the statistic result, many people choose this program to have fun and laugh after a day they were up to ears in their work and assignments.
In approaching this issue, apart from the reason given above, another reason that deserves some words is that entertaining program brings about the strong relationship between family members since the family gets together to watch their favorite show. As you know individuals in each family have a tendency to watch a specific program. For example, a kid wants to switch cartoon channel, father prefer to watch news or documentary program and mother follow the romantic series. Therefore, they conflict with each other about their interesting program, consequently, they prefer to watch their desired program at their home. However, the entertaining program is fascinating for all of them. As a result, they could not only enjoy their leisure time together but also have a chit chat about their daily life, as they were away from each other whole day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to entertain'.
Suggestion: to entertain
...op their knowledge, while others choose entertaining programs. As far as I am concerned, I p...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... together to watch their favorite show. As you know individuals in each family hav...
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Line 3, column 852, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey were away from each other whole day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85838150289 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57166486719 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580924855491 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4231215444 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302836649663 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111320806467 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805128370501 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197140223948 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027182745567 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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