do you think that television programs,movies and video games influence young people's behavior?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , movies
Television programs,movies and video games apart from entertainmen...
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...and video games apart from entertainment ,it influences young peoples behavior als...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t ,it influences young peoples behavior also. Firstly,I would say that children...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , I
...oung peoples behavior also. Firstly,I would say that childrens have limited t...
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Suggestion: For
...ted their imagination to these programs.For example:movies like Batman and Superman...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , children
... but not other than these. Furthermore,children become addicted to these television sho...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , as
...these television shows and leave studies,as they are so much engrossed in it.For ex...
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Suggestion: For
...ies,as they are so much engrossed in it.For example:children bunk their classes of ...
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Suggestion: In
...they are engaging and exciting for them.In addition,there many voilent shows commi...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , there
...gaging and exciting for them.In addition,there many voilent shows comming on televisio...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , so
...many voilent shows comming on television,so we should have eye on our kids what the...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'eyed'.
Suggestion: eyed
...comming on television,so we should have eye on our kids what they are watching.Chil...
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Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Children
... eye on our kids what they are watching.Children may be watching some18plus content on t...
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Suggestion: Even
...ad to severe consequences in their life.Even sometimes children imitate just like th...
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Suggestion: For
...vourate heroes which come on television.For example:news came on night that a child...
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Line 7, column 690, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...e superman tried to jump from a building ,got injuries.As,he fall down from the bu...
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Line 7, column 705, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: As
...d to jump from a building ,got injuries.As,he fall down from the building.These te...
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Line 7, column 705, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d to jump from a building ,got injuries.As,he fall down from the building.These te...
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Line 7, column 707, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , he
...to jump from a building ,got injuries.As,he fall down from the building.These telev...
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Line 7, column 711, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'falls'.
Suggestion: falls
...ump from a building ,got injuries.As,he fall down from the building.These television...
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Line 7, column 739, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: These
...uries.As,he fall down from the building.These television programs makes us lethargic ...
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Line 7, column 739, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this television' or 'These televisions'?
Suggestion: This television; These televisions
...uries.As,he fall down from the building.These television programs makes us lethargic and mentall...
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Suggestion: So
...ethargic and mentally unstable by brain.So,people should go gyms and parks to play...
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Line 7, column 817, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , people
...hargic and mentally unstable by brain.So,people should go gyms and parks to play outdoo...
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Line 7, column 899, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...utdoor sports rather watching television , movies and playing video games.But ther...
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Suggestion: But
...vision , movies and playing video games.But there are some positive aspects of them...
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...lso for instance:many movies are made on history of a country, how it got freedom...
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Suggestion: This
...story of a country, how it got freedom?.This incalcates patriotic behaviour in child...
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Suggestion: Some
...viour in children towards their country.Some movies breaks the social taboos in soci...
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Line 7, column 1144, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'break'.
Suggestion: break
...ldren towards their country.Some movies breaks the social taboos in society for exampl...
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Line 7, column 1274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , caste
...equal rights irrespective of their creed,caste and sex.This will generate a egalitarin...
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Suggestion: This
...respective of their creed,caste and sex.This will generate a egalitarinism in childr...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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... creed,caste and sex.This will generate a egalitarinism in children.Another movie...
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...ll generate a egalitarinism in children.Another movies are made on uniques ideas like y...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... made him billionaire At the end,some people say that programs,movies and vid...
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Line 13, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , movies
...At the end,some people say that programs,movies and video games influence young peoples...
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Line 13, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , others
... games influence young peoples behaviour,others say that these things do not make impac...
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Line 13, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...o not make impact on the minds of young generations behaviour.But ,in my opinion i will say...
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Suggestion: But
...he minds of young generations behaviour.But ,in my opinion i will say that televisi...
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Line 13, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...minds of young generations behaviour.But ,in my opinion i will say that television...
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Line 13, column 210, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...enerations behaviour.But ,in my opinion i will say that television,video games an...
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Line 13, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , video
...in my opinion i will say that television,video games and movies are the key or major m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, apart from, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82736156352 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50498253882 2.67179642975 131% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635179153094 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.1344086022 507% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 761.087380003 48.9658058833 1554% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 596.333333333 100.406767564 594% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.333333333 20.6045352989 497% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 42.3333333333 5.45110844103 777% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.5376344086 758% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280691359775 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26332442987 0.076458572812 344% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186955308793 0.0737576698707 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26230696056 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191907419759 0.0645574589148 297% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.2 11.7677419355 486% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -48.97 58.1214874552 -84% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 6.10430107527 362% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.4 10.1575268817 447% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.72 10.9000537634 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.48 8.01818996416 168% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.0537634409 426% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.