Claim: The best test of an argument is its ability to convince someone with an opposing viewpoint.
Reason: Only by being forced to defend an idea against the doubts and contrasting views of others does one really discover the value of that idea.
I agree with that fact that the best test of an argument is ability to convince someone with an opposing viewpoint.As there are large number of theories given by scientists but their were some points which do not go with the motion and a new theory comes due to opposing viewpoints like Thomson plump pudding model was replaced by the Bohr's model as it was a more updated version and he told that electron moves in a orbit and has 2n^2 electron in each shell where n is number of shells like in 1st shell it will be 2 electrons and so on .for example in BC people and scientist at that time believed that earth is a plate like structure but Galileo opposed the notion and put his new theory that earth is round.
government make large number of rules for the citizens which accepted by a certain section of society but abhored by other section which keep their suggestions .For example reservation in India are made by Pandit Jawaharlal Nehru which enjoyed by scheduled tribe,schedule caste people but the general category one has contrasting viewpoint that they are not benefited by these rules.For example the abrogation of article 370 from kashmir has made kashmir a part of india and all the restrictions made on the kashmiri origin people were removed and only the congress party was opposing it because they thought it would lead to riots and agression between hindu and muslims.
As there was a large amount of corruption made in India 2014 scams and scandals were in abundance then a social leader Anna Hazare and arvind kejriwal put pressure on the government to implement a bill called a Lokpal in parliament but it had some opposing factors like the team of lokpal did not have equal members of each political party.
So I conclude by saying that the best test of an argument is ability to convince someone with an opposing viewpoint because it will lead to a better result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67365269461 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48899654567 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 23.0359550562 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 231.845314811 60.3974514979 384% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 390.25 118.986275619 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.5 23.4991977007 355% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208266492179 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150134954561 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136785006275 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150134954561 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136785006275 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.3 14.1392134831 299% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 48.8420337079 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 12.1743820225 283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.38706741573 138% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 11.8971910112 437% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 11.2143820225 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 35.0 11.7820224719 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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