God gives us relatives, thank god we can choose our friends. Friendship is a pivotal part of our lives. It has never failed to arouse public concerns about how to strengthen the friendship and at the same time provoke a hot debate among individuals. It's hard to deny that having a good time with friends create more joyous memories. Such a fact leads impressionable people to be strong believers that it's the best way to enhance a relationship. However, it suffers from both factual and logical fallacies and thus needs to be examined meticulously. Accordingly, I, without hesitation, advocate that solving problems together is a more suitable choice. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will elaborate on in the following passage.
First of all, it enables people to develop deep connections with friends, as they are inclined to share more of their lives with you. As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Solving problems requires more advanced interactions, it needs you to build trust, constantly communicate and exchange ideas with each other. No one can deny that these activities are propitious for a lifelong relationship. Thus, the essentialness of figuring out solution for your friends is crystal clear even to the layman's eyes.
Second, the fact that it give us a chance to experience different situations indicate that we should participate in problem solving. Our life journeys are full of ups and downs, and having problems is one of the most situations we may encounter with. It prepares us to master certain skills to maintain a relationship. Meanwhile, when we try to solve our friend's problem, it requires us to master many specific skills, such as showing empathy, listening to others carefully, and respecting different opinions. Moreover, if we have a understanding of how to build friendship when everything goes well, we are unlikely to know what to do next. In extreme case, we may lose some friends. Take the case of myself, I tried to make sure all my memories with friends are positive, while avoid facing difficulties with my friends. As a result, when one of my friends had obstacles in her way of working and turned me for help, I had no idea how to help her, and we seldom have conversations after all. Had it not been for this experience, I would never have a grasp of the importance of solving problems with our friends contributes to a healthy relationship.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that having a good time with your friends is more comfortable than fixing problems, thus enable us to form steady relationship with our friends. Ironically, this comfortableness can only benefit people in short term, and will lose its charm in long term when people need to face more difficult situations.
Considering all the arguments and examples given above, we can safely draw the conclusion that the process of dealing with problems is the best way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...able people to be strong believers that its the best way to enhance a relationship....
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...res more advanced interactions, it needs you to build trust, constantly communica...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ifferent opinions. Moreover, if we have a understanding of how to build friendshi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, well, while, after all, i feel, in short, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93279022403 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89957858432 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553971486762 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4390347378 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.88 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.64 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32693426001 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079044560447 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656379328889 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168214553064 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702803605537 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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