Earth is one of the most important place for living creatures incluing humans, animals and plants. A lot of human activity that has been done had a trendemous effect in it weather it was good or bad. Some people believe that earth is being harmed by human activity. Other disagree. In my point of view I believe that human have a harmful impact on earth. I feel this way for two important reasons.
To begin with, in the last two decades a lot of campaign and varieties activity were held to increase the human awareness toward the environment and the role of human on it. One of the most common example that mostly everobody knows is the Global warming. This comes from the deplate of the ozon in the stratosphere allowing the dangerous sun rais (uv) to reach the earth` surface and causing a lot harmfull effect.
For example, I saw one documentary on TV, where some German scientist were measuring the harmful effect that human are making to their environment and all of those activites increase the global warming. The scientists mentioned that emission of carbon monoxide that comes from burining fuels and wood increase the air pollution in which we live. They mentioned that if preventive measures and activity would not start the earth would be the place which would not support the human life on it anymore.
Secondly, the life that is supported on the forest is decreasing and endangering the ecosystem cycle. With the industrialization of the world a lot of forest are being cut which is being used for human purposes such as furniture, decorations, house making. The deforsetification has a huge role in the formation of the oxygen that is crucial to sustain the life on Earth. Further more this would cause the destinction of the animals living on these spaces.
For example, when I was kid me and my family went to visit my grand father in village every weekend. I remember that there used to be a beauful mountine with a lot of trees like pine and different animals. From the last visit that I did I remember that all that beautiful view that I had on my mind disepared, the trees were cut and now it looked like a field were only part of the trees root were left
These activities destroyed and had a catastrophic effect in a lot of parts of the world.
To sum up, humans had always been responsible for all the disturbance that has caused the Earth. The use of fuels for heat, and wood made the environment that we live more dangerouse and less livable. I recommend that immediate measures should be taken to prevent the Earth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun campaign seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of campaigns'.
Suggestion: a lot of campaigns
To begin with, in the last two decades a lot of campaign and varieties activity were held to in...
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Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a lot of campaign and varieties activity were held to increase the human awarenes...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and now it looked like a field were only part of the trees root were left Thes...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e only part of the trees root were left These activities destroyed and had a cat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69920844327 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66681402071 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514511873351 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1233761304 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.3125 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306219281365 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899047681895 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611464362858 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154639362009 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573294138128 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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