The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop
working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone in this world has a goal. This goal could be small or large. The important thing in the mind of each person is figuring out how to achieve them. Without any doubt, people will face a lot of challenges in the way towards their dreams, and the question is, how to act when you feel like you’re about to lose your path. “Never give up, never.” is a famous saying that gives a possible answer to this question and states that we as humans should not give up when trying to get to what we need. I agree with the statement for many reasons that I’m going to discuss next.
One essential fact that people should bear in mind when they’re chasing their aims is that success is a result; not a gift. This is the first reason why I agree with the statement. Once people realize that fact they will accordingly believe in the possibility of doing anything as long as the needed amount of work is satisfied. For instance, if your goal is to pass some kind of test then you have to work hard to get the desired result and not expect to do it without any effort. And if you failed that doesn’t mean that the test was impossible to pass, but it means that you need to practice more until you possess the right skills to do. In other words, your failure is an indication that you’re not there yet.
The other reason why I agree with the saying has nothing to do with the actual meaning of it. I believe that the mentality of people who apply the concept of not giving up is more robust than those who do not. What I am trying to say is that although sometimes we don’t sense the effectiveness of maintaining this principle in our life, actually we gain a lot of special traits without even noticing. Patience, for example, will develop among people who stand against the obstacles and fight back no matter how many times they fall.
In summary, there are a lot of reasons that can explain why one could agree with such a statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, first, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in summary, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37569060773 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24146036372 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1028310283 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335601283175 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986863134403 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711651358892 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185700529269 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783124254851 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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