The expression "Never , never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Shiv Khera said ,in one of his iconic books "You can win", "Most people fail because they don't even try". I believe it is better to die trying than to live regretting. We must keep trying and never stop working for our goals.
First, your goals defines who you are. You may want to be a dancer but your undergrad degree is in physics, or maybe your ambition is to become a pro-gamer but you are born with severe eye problem, believe me when I say that these problems are nothing compare to your willpower. If you can harness your inner strength you will achieve your goal. Where we start from does not define who we are, it is where we end. "Never, never give up" is the moto of every successful person there was, is and ever will be. Successful artists such as dylan, picasso took the risk of failure and never gave up on their dreams. If we want to be successful we have to risk it too and work hard till the end.
Second, failure is nothing but a second step towards success. Even if you fail a few times when you are working hard for your dreams , you will win sooner or later if you keep on walking on this path. Failure opens different avenues in life and maybe you will find out that your goals weren't discrete enough or maybe you still didn't put your all for the goals.
Take the example of Casemiro , now a legendary centre midfielder, he started his career as a striker and never qualified for the first team. The repeated failures helped him to realise what his true position should be. Do not settle! Maybe you are just one failure away from finding our true position in the circle of life.
None of us has a perfect life , we all fail in something and win in something else. But there is nothing worse than failing without even trying. We should always keep on fighting for our goals. Even if we lose the fight we might rediscover ourselves , always worth the try.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45868945869 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21144522477 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569800569801 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3215662516 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.25 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283055959928 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845895463995 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082877959143 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140175798184 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775911574577 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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