Family is indeed an essential part in anyone's life as it not only supports us but also guides us when we are wrong. It is always there with us regardless of any situation. However, nowadays, Family size is tremendously changing as people are getting more engaged in their hectic lifestyles. There is a constant debate whether extended family - grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles- is less important than it was in the past. Personally, I am of the opinion that the value of extended family has degraded over the last few decades. I believe this for two main reasons, which I have explained in the following essay.
First of all, people living in metropolitan cities are too busy with their work-life that they don't have time for their own kids, let alone extended family. Ceaseless work pressure, excruciating overtime and alarmingly low wages have left people with no option but to continuously focus on their work while neglecting family. Moreover, many even shy away from responsibilities of taking care of their elderly grandparents. They prefer not to spend their hard-earned money on their medication and health-care. And rather they would spend on leisure activities. This has weakened the bond among families.
Secondly, people nowadays prioritize friends over family which has increased distance between family members. For instance, people prefer to spend their free time partying, shopping or hanging out with their friends. Youngsters do not prefer to visit their old grandparents or uncles as they believe that they do not share anything common due to generation gap and hence, do not talk with them. As a result, the communication gap between them has also widened.
In conclusion, I hold the opinion that the importance of extended families has dwindled extremely due to the hectic lifestyle in urban areas and shift in priority from family to friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...too busy with their work-life that they dont have time for their own kids, let alone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15409836066 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79718709209 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.985633715 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216917383592 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735936562047 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172266684101 0.0737576698707 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141561031672 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122899228114 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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