Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies?
A country is defined by versatile unique characteristics that it has and
Are shown in the movies. I am a huge fan of watching documentaries that show different attributes of a country. These movies have taught me precious information
About the special rituals and customs of a country, its financial situation and specific laws
That are observed in it.
As we all know, every country has its unique rituals and traditions that
Stem from its culture. Years ago, I watched a movie about Iran that
Depicted different aspects of Iranian's culture and traditions. The movie
Covered all three types of living, Rural, nomadic and urban life. There was an
Extremely interesting fact that I learned from this movie, and it was that still
Many of Iranian people are nomads, which means they have herds of
Sheep and goats, and they travel to long distances in a year to provide
Food for their herds.
On the other hand, a movie can show the financial situation of
A country. There was a famous documentary about UAE, and the
Director showed the gigantic progress of this country, which was a
Desert 30 years ago. If you travel there, and you know nothing
About its history, you might think that this country has always been
A developed country, but the truth is another thing. UAE leaders
Started to build this country in 1980 when this country was nothing more than a vast
Desert and by perseverance and hard-working, they turned it to
A first-class country, which more than 40 million people per year come there to
Spend their vacation.
As a result of watching another documentary that was about Nigeria, I
Learned that people living in this Arab language country have to observe
Specific dress codes. Women have to wear hijab, which is a scarf that
Covers their hair, and any tourist that visits there has to comply
To this rule. Social freedom is not as what is defined in western countries, and, for
Example, women cannot put bikinis on the beach. It was shown through this movie that
Women's participation in social activities is severely restricted.
To put it in a nutshell, it can be stated that movies have taught me
Valuable information about different countries. Information, such as
Their unique style of living, their financial growth and its history, and the status of
Social freedom in every country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, another thing, as to, such as, you know, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00252525253 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57061652715 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502525252525 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2884853202 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.529411765 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.53405017921 728% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288288696977 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917536354295 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602104675474 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663428583659 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627201557728 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.