Games are as important for adults as they are for children.

I agree with statement that games are important for adults. Obviously adults’ games are different from children’s game. There are several reasons why I think this way.
First of all, sport games affect positively for our health. Nowadays, there are many diseases cause obesity and wrong lifestyle. Regular sport activity can solve this problem.
The second, games affect not only body health but also mental health. Connecting other people through games are can protect from loneliness. Having fun with your friends and family bring pleasure to everyone. It is not only playing but also provides a chance to talking, making joke and exchange feeling with each other. In the modern life now, live communication is important. We should spend time with each other more often.
Another reason is that playing game is relaxing. Some adults have bad habits for relieve their stress. For instant, smoking and drink alcohol. It is the bad way to spend their free time. Instead of this, playing video game or visiting casino is better way to have fun.
In conclusion, games can be fun, relaxing and healthy. Additionally, there are bad sides too. Adults must determine limit their time and money to spend for game themselves.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13432835821 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46927607279 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.8975589953 48.9658058833 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.6 100.406767564 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.05 20.6045352989 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321509473132 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883648703088 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108100914567 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194150978248 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111066083354 0.0645574589148 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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