some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. what is your opinion?

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some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. what is your opinion?

different people have different opinions about that computer have made life easier and more convenient or not based on their feeling and life experience. I agree with that statement computers have made life easier and more convenient. I have following reasons why I feel this way which are computers save time, connect people and make easier people's job.
first of all, computers save time. nowadays, every service using computers in order to save time. for instance, there is no need to queue for some bank services which can done on internet at home by yourself. in addition, now people make things faster than few decades ago, such as, financial calculation, making movie or animation and publish news. these are just few examples of saving time by computers.
my next reason is computers can connect people to others just like phone. therefore internet directly means world wide web. we can speak and see each other like together no matter how far we are. another usage of computer's connections is that it can connect people to services. for instance usage of computers in public services, order goods or services online and pay money quickly. there are people who are cannot go anywhere such as, people who have health problems, very busy people and mothers have infant baby. computers help them by online teaching, online market and other online services.
my last reason is computers can do complicated things. for instance, computers can recognize people by fingerprint or eyes and distinguish them. people using this in time registration system and security system. nowadays, computers have artificial mind. therefore, computers can do anything which people cannot do.
there is denying fact that computers have made life more complex and stressful. nevertheless, taking into account of all these factors , we may reach conclusion that computers have made life easier and more convenient.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1986970684 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53874513315 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3410872524 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5454545455 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9545454545 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470914929611 0.236089414692 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147466331864 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148664451644 0.0737576698707 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294697637996 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179666797714 0.0645574589148 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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