Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

No doubt, I agree with this statement that a universities and colleges, social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. I would in here explain numerous reasons as follows.
First of all, in my opinion, the most important reason is that to gain competence from social activities and sports just as to gain knowledge from class or books. Competence of our days has become more and more worthwhile. The beneficial competence can change our life to live a better in the future and high salary job. Furthermore, it has so efficiency because hundreds of candidates compete with each other. So, a universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
The second reason is that, receiving financial support for universities and colleges, sports and social activities as classes and libraries can change our life positively. For instance, do sports and participate social activities have many advantages which gives us many opportunities in future life. When you were beginner sportsman or inactive social events at university or colleges in early years, perhaps you have already become professional and good personality skill in a graduation year. Therefore, it has so efficiency because there is a good financial support for students.
The third reason, it makes our life rich and colorful around the universities and colleges. On the other hand, people cannot gain this feeling from our common life and private things. It expands our eyesight and learns a great amount of new things. Of course decrease stress and some bad feelings around universities for do sports or fun social activity.
In conclusion, modern society, people need to receive financial support for sports and social activity. Why I think this is few of them above.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2582781457 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82179827457 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8040055062 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4117647059 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469038194488 0.236089414692 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147249689201 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200542361704 0.0737576698707 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273126691114 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150479638529 0.0645574589148 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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