Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
I do not deny this idea that some people think about the computers have made life more complex and stressful but I agree with this idea that the computers have made life easier and more convenient which reasons are as follows; more faster than me, very neat and does not tired.
First of all, computers work faster than me as the directions. If I have to write ten same poems or letters, I have been writing one by one as old one and by hand but the computers are not same as me, moreover; these are just pressing ten copies by printer. Consequently, It does not take too much time. In additionally, the computers are so efficiency and easy to making the best of it. On the other hand, you can fast get rid of under the circumstances and great amount of paperwork.
Second reason is that, computers are very neat. In my opinion, writing some clear or pure things by hand, it is not good idea but using computers more convenient and of course it will be neat and clear. They do not make and mistakes cut the wrong way and each time as neatly as the time before. As a result, paper or something there is no spot or spill on the paper. I could not never be as neat as a computer.
Last reason is that, computers are never get tired. I prefer using computerns because I seem to they never feel hard work and never afraid of work. They can work middle of the night or early morning it is no difference. If I work a lot, I get tired and I could not work at all in the middle of the night. At the end, computers have made life easier and more convenient or can to be fast, neat and tireless. The computers are probably the best technology in the world.
In conclusion, let you know why I all of ideas supportive. It is imply computers needed in people’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
...onvenient which reasons are as follows; more faster than me, very neat and does not tired. ...
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'tire'
... faster than me, very neat and does not tired. First of all, computers work faster t...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, of course, you know, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2776119403 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40420660526 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486567164179 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.4383446393 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4210526316 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323121815267 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843900995644 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120879839627 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189011314292 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128184976434 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.