In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Longevity has always been a controversial issue. People are trying to figure out why people tend to live longer now than they did before. My writing aims at thoroughly discuss the reasons for such increase in the length of people's lives.
First and foremost, it is obvious that medical development has surely contributed to the extension of people's life span. Needless to say, the arrival of various more effective treatments and medicines has helped cured several disease and increased patients' chances of living. Take the story of my great grand father as an example, even though he was diagnosed with lung cancer a few years ago, he managed to live for another year thanks to the advanced technology. The doctors also said that he would not have been able to live that long if it had not been for the chemo treatment.
Secondly, another factor that helps prolong people's longevity is the enhancement in the quality of life. The fact is that it is no longer common for people nowadays to have to suffer from the lack of food and shelter. With the rocketing growth of the economy worldwide, life standards are becoming higher. Less and less people need to struggle for their every meal, and they also get easier access to facilities such as hospitals and other welfare services. For instance, my grand parents do not have to work on the farm like they used to, so they now can enjoy their old age at home instead of spending nights and days outdoors. Also they are also provided with other necessary privileges such as free hospitalization and financial aids.
Indeed, the expansion in people's life span depends only multiple elements; however,the most obvious ones are as mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'several diseases'.
Suggestion: several diseases
...eatments and medicines has helped cured several disease and increased patients chances of livin...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...standards are becoming higher. Less and less people need to struggle for their every...
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Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d of spending nights and days outdoors. Also they are also provided with other neces...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... depends only multiple elements; however,the most obvious ones are as mentioned abov...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for instance', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246835443038 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.161392405063 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0886075949367 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0886075949367 0.046263068375 192% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0506329113924 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123417721519 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0411392405063 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50444463085 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0411392405063 0.0309702414327 133% => OK
Particles: 0.00316455696203 0.00188951952338 167% => OK
Determiners: 0.0727848101266 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00632911392405 0.0209618222197 30% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00632911392405 0.0139019557991 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1696.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 289.0 408.028673835 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86851211073 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349480968858 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259515570934 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155709342561 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114186851211 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50444463085 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.524397521467 119% => OK
Word variations: 71.4137373478 59.2087087015 121% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6428571429 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4777883948 48.84282405 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 46.5944142363 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.36842105263 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30028156512 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0857481207109 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0608690423328 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514725024254 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165429361005 0.151897553556 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118062561656 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546457855107 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279947540392 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112565351619 0.067059652881 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196970742246 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630064208717 0.0618886996521 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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