In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
It is true people are living longer nowadays. In the early 19th century the average life expectancy at birth was 50 years but nowadays it is 75 years. If we go through research data then we are really surprised with such a vast increase in life span of human beings. There are so many causes of this phenomenon.
First, today's medical services have become so advanced that doctors are able to cure different diseases. People are getting cured with cancer and tumors. As the medical sciences invented medicines the people live longer. In 2019 the corona virus spread widely throughout the world but researchers found vaccination in 6 months to cure patients with corona virus. The knowledge of science and research techniques are one of the major reasons to make life longer.
Second, previously people used homemade remedies and herbs to cure illness which is not sufficient. These days we have a wide range of medicines of different brands to help patients with different diseases. Even patients with the same problem get different medicines on their needs. For example, two people have a common cough and cold one feels better with homemade special tea but others do not because of the immunity and body building of that person.
Third, there are so many different types of machinery to help medical science to deal with chronic illness as well as understanding body changes. Laboratories have different types of blood test machinery which detect the cause of sickness and there are x ray, ultrasounds and other machinery also available in hospitals to find problem areas in the human body. Such advancement in medical services makes human beings have a greater life span.
Finally, these are a few reasons mentioned in the above paragraphs which are the cause of living longer life phenomenon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, then, third, well, for example, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52905559888 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.130978378 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7647058824 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143115463171 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638106605983 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817698546108 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999913227431 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686820198856 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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