Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today’s world is filled with scientific innovations and the automobile is one of the greatest inventions. The automobile really helps people to move from one place to another easily. I do not totally agree with the statement that people in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles. I think there are three main reasons which strengthen my position in the subsequent paragraphs.
Therefore, we all had read that “necessity is the mother of invention”. From the invention of the wheel to the automatic vehicles researchers are just fulfilling the needs of human beings. The use of automobiles saves time and energy which we could use in creative and productive works. We use automobiles to go to the office or other places daily just to kill our exhaustion. It does not imply that we are dependable on automobiles, because we choose other options also in need.
Furthermore, today’s cities are larger and also dense with population. An individual can not travel 10 miles from home to office daily on foot because it makes him tired for all long days. Similarly, it is also not possible that he or she can afford a rented house or apartment too close to the office. There are so many reasons people use automobiles to commute. Sometimes people use vehicles for small distances also due to medical situations, so we can not say people have become too dependent on automobiles.
However, walking is good for health and everyone should walk daily. But the automobiles are not interrupting the habit of walking because it is one's own choice. If someone doesn't want to do any physical exercise then no one can force him or her, so we can not blame automobiles. In emergency situations or for daily routine work we choose automobiles to travel due to its need.
Conclusively, on the basis of the above discussed reasons we can say that people have not become too dependent on automobiles, it is just a machine which provides ease to use. Life and work will continue if we remove automobiles from the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, similarly, so, then, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89565217391 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84078082695 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51884057971 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4789009969 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.45 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274539547979 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919843656869 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113892631578 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175020624425 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112901054694 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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