Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Everyone eats food according to their pallet and availability of food. Nowadays street food and eat at restaurants is popular especially among the younger generation. I prefer to prepare and eat food at home because of several reasons.

Moreover, cooking is also an art and everyone is not perfect in cooking or we can say everyone does not have time to cook food at home. To prepare food for families similar to restaurants is not possible for everyone so they prefer to go out for food. I enjoy doing experiments in my kitchen and making some new for my family. However , some food items take so much time and are difficult to make at home but we do not eat such items on a daily basis. These are something special and I make them on some special occasion or when I get time.

Furthermore, the food at restaurants and streets are not much safe in comparison to food prepared at home. At home we cook in small quantities and take care of hygiene whereas in restaurants food is prepared in large quantities and we can not give guarantee of hygiene. At home we customize our food according to the weather but in restaurants the food is always the same. For example, in Indian cooking people use more garlic and ginger in winters and less in summers but in restaurants they cook the same food throughout the year.

In addition, when we go out for lunch or dinner it costs nearly $20 for my family, at the same price we can make a one days complete meal for two times. Such as in the Bay area a 12 inches pizza costs 12 dollars and I make it at home with extra toppings It costs me less than 6 dollar including electricity and all.

Conclusively, these are only three reasons to prepare food at home. There are so many other reasons that also support my idea to cook food at home is good.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: one day; a day; days
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42900302115 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49495062729 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489425981873 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6164022465 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391595260889 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160641265299 0.076458572812 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102031813854 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247203332568 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114596925297 0.0645574589148 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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