Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Food is one the basic need of our lives and for a healthy life healthy food is really essential. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that eating outside is fascinating, whereas, others hold different perspective. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of everything. I personally, though, believe that cooking and eating food at home is amazing. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support,
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, if you have food at home a lot of money can be saved. It is not as necessary to eat always home made food. To exemplify, I do remember when I was kid and mom accustomed to say eat home made food it is healthy do not waste your the money on things that provides bad elements to body. Now, I realize why she said that recently my cousin met an accident and he is in hospital with severe damage and his parents do not have enough money for his son surgery, simple surgery involves 2 surgeries as he have fatty liver which is a result of junk food. It had not be that much severe if he ate healthy. Thus, this example elucidates that no matter what try to eat healthy.
Secondly, the homemade food is clean and it keeps people away from the bacterial infections. People eat a lot in restaurants and outside home which is acceptable sometimes but not on regular basis. For instance, one day I went on outing with my friends and luckily I did not eat because I already had dinner at home and that was a sudden plan. When we came back home pain started in the stomach of my friend first we thought it is normal than she had a huge vomit we ran to hospital doctor told us she is suffering from food poisoning. I have to admit that my opinion on the matter have been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Therefore, this instance illustrates that food cooked at home is way more hygenic.
In light of reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that eating at home is good choice to live a long and healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'eat'.
Suggestion: always eat
...can be saved. It is not as necessary to eat always home made food. To exemplify, I do reme...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to say eat home made food it is healthy do not waste your the money on things th...
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Line 2, column 549, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...mple surgery involves 2 surgeries as he have fatty liver which is a result of junk f...
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Line 2, column 609, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ch is a result of junk food. It had not be that much severe if he ate healthy. Thu...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ner at home and that was a sudden plan. When we came back home pain started in the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4385026738 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48018254206 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548128342246 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1524467956 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6470588235 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315510725055 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106104402212 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695236451208 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191616251314 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312963072207 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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