Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Food in one of the basic need of life and we can not not live without eating. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that people should always eat outside, whereas, some have opposite perspective. I personally, though, believe that cooking and eating food at home is good but sometimes for entertainment purpose individual can go at restaurant. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, the home made food is healthy and hygienic. It is important to to eat healthy to live a long life. To exemplify, when I was child my mother always run after me to teach me cooking but I hate it. I realize the importance of hand made food when my room mates eat daily outside and complain about their health issues. I was the only one who do not eat at unhealthy junk food. Thus, this example elucidates that, people must eat clean food.
Secondly, a lot of money can be saved if people eat at home. The food at at the food stands is really expensive and everyone can not afford it. For instance, when I was in high school my friends had get together on every weekend at new restaurants which are a way more expensive just because of the location and the food they offer is low quality. In addition, my friend got ill just before the final exams and diagnose with the severe food poisoning. As a result, she was not able to gave exam and missed the whole semester. Therefore, this instance illustrates that sometimes outing is good for fun but if you make it habit you will suffer.
To wrap up, I believe that now a days people made it a trend to go to different restaurants and take pictures to post it on socail app which is not good. The business man who runs the hotels, food stand and restaurants they have no concern with our health they just want to make money. People should cook food at home whatever they want to eat, as everything is available in market.
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...s healthy and hygienic. It is important to to eat healthy to live a long life. To exe...
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...e saved if people eat at home. The food at at the food stands is really expensive and...
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...hen I was in high school my friends had get together on every weekend at new restau...
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...ill suffer. To wrap up, I believe that now a days people made it a trend to go to differe...
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...t want to make money. People should cook food at home whatever they want to eat, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44011142061 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42395536773 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551532033426 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5419986422 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8947368421 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360262030323 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113591589218 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797417849145 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228405952349 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214436656347 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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