Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Overall the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today s world Use reasons and details to support your opinion
In this modern era, the internet is one of the most advance technology. It is necessary for the betterment of life and have numerous benefits. Some people believe that it has more positive effect while others disagree. In my view, internet have positive effect on life as it is made for our good use, but it totally depends on us how we take it. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, the use of internet is increased nowadays no one can imagine to live without it. Now, in our education system internet is a basic need for students. Education has received a huge boost as uncountable books and journals are available online from libraries across the world. This has made research easier. For instance, when I was in university it was really arduous for me to complete my final year research project. Moreover, I downloaded thousands for journals online to study and I had a limited budget for my publication by the help of internet I passed my final exam. Thus, this example elucidates that internet is beneficial.
Secondly, internet is the only way to communicate with your loved once across the world. It provides effective communication via email and instant message all over the globe. For example, when my marriage is fixed I was worried about how I will survive abroad without my family, as I am accustomed to live with my parents. Now my family is so far but it seems like they are with me when I call and see live on video each single moment, it is fascinating and I am living a happy life. Therefore, this example illustrates that this technology can also be misuse but it depends on person.
To wrap up, as internet have a lot knowledge but it can be misuse sometimes people spread hate. The internet has also led to a complete transformation in communication, availability of knowledge as well as social interaction. However, as with all major technological changes, there are positive and negative effects of the internet on the society too and it completely the choice of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagine living'.
Suggestion: imagine living
...ternet is increased nowadays no one can imagine to live without it. Now, in our education syste...
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Suggestion:
...d thousands for journals online to study and I had a limited budget for my public...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to living'.
Suggestion: accustomed to living
...rvive abroad without my family, as I am accustomed to live with my parents. Now my family is so fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71857923497 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77741479906 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546448087432 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6350583458 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.35 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180037985937 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544964886628 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460987919564 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116485933725 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592997935134 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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