TPO 41 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Teacher plays an important role in our society and they must be valued by every single person. While some people believe that in past students gave teachers a lot of respect while other disagree. In my view, as we are living in the modern era where it is arduous to teach children about the moral values of teachers because this generation do not want to listen anyone. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, in past teachers were more appreciated by students even by their parents and they were considered the must respect full profession. The future of the students means everything for them and they really care about it. For instance, my father told me that when he was in school their teachers always guide them in all circumstances. If, teacher said something wrong in anger we respect it too because they are the one who taught us how to treat elders and children. The reality is i have not seen such scenes in my real life students answer back even teacher scold for a right purpose. Thus, this instance elaborates that no matter what we must respect our teachers.
Secondly, nowadays teaching is a business instead of a profession. All schools, colleges and university are worried about their money. No doubt money is necessary, but for dollars they have no right to compromise the life of students. For example, when I was in university I paid a heavy amount of my fee for my studies, but in our labs there was no proper equipments for our practicals and teachers do not care about the time and cancel the classes at the end moment. So, how they can think this generation will give them high appreciation. It is time to make things correct. Therefore, this example illustrates that teachers love money not students.
To wrap up, I believe that in past teachers had pure heart for their students and they were really true mentor. The concept of teaching is completely transformed now. Teachers who we can significantly respect are very rare.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... must be valued by every single person. While some people believe that in past studen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70752089136 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54728636805 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548746518106 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.262538019 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176490640656 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051407560984 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444776697921 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113899244713 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378262616101 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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